i don't know if i'm just in a rut where my writing isn't as good, or if i'm just being hard on myself and not pleased with my work.. :/
in any event, as i'm sure anyone who keeps up with my work can guess, this is about my boyfriend and my love. i was just randomly thinking of him, and this is what came of it. i really can't imagine where i'd be without him. he has helped me so much, and i love him so very much.
Your poetry is fairly good. I would lvoe to see a free verse poem from you. WHile your rhymes are strong I can see your poems taking a whole new depth if you allowed your words to take yyou anywhere without being slightly caged by rhyme.
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Society is an asexual predator a virus, a manifest that cannot be stopped and all in the way will perish
well thank you. i really hope it's growing from this, because i don't particularly like this much. i don't know, a lot of the times rhymes help me with the next line and i guess it's kind of like they're my safety net. free verse is something i may try in the near future though.
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Society is an asexual predator
a virus, a manifest that cannot be stopped
and all in the way will perish
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No one is ever heartless. Sometimes the heart is just darkened or misplaced.
You can be the farthest from someone when you're right next to them and the closest when you're a million miles away.
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Society is an asexual predator
a virus, a manifest that cannot be stopped
and all in the way will perish
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Love all, trust a few. Do wrong to none.
Being materialistic is just another form of stupid.
Two halves of a broken heart makes a happy couple.
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No one is ever heartless. Sometimes the heart is just darkened or misplaced.
You can be the farthest from someone when you're right next to them and the closest when you're a million miles away.
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Love all, trust a few. Do wrong to none.
Being materialistic is just another form of stupid.
Two halves of a broken heart makes a happy couple.
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No one is ever heartless. Sometimes the heart is just darkened or misplaced.
You can be the farthest from someone when you're right next to them and the closest when you're a million miles away.
--
Love all, trust a few. Do wrong to none.
Being materialistic is just another form of stupid.
Two halves of a broken heart makes a happy couple.
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No one is ever heartless. Sometimes the heart is just darkened or misplaced.
You can be the farthest from someone when you're right next to them and the closest when you're a million miles away.
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